http://ashoka.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ashoka.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] curious_spells 2007-11-27 10:21 pm (UTC)

Hi! I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying this story. The writing is great, and the characterization is really wonderful. I like the switch of Gojyou and Hakkai's circumstances - Hakkai is the halfbreed now and his mother is trying to kill him - but the way their original personalities shine through is really great. Hakkai is still creepy, wonderful Hakkai and Gojyou is still kind, vulnerable and crude.

So yeah, really looking forward to more. I hope this is going to be a lot longer , but even if there are only a few more chapters I will still very definitely love this story. Thanks for sharing it.

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