I so wish I could give you some sort of real critique, tell you intelligently what I like about this and why instead of just giving you short broken phrases with lots of exclimation points and flailing.
I can't. Becuase I'm too busy flailing over how much I love this story. Perhaps next chapter, though I doubt it ^^;;
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Date: 2007-11-29 10:52 pm (UTC)I can't. Becuase I'm too busy flailing over how much I love this story. Perhaps next chapter, though I doubt it ^^;;
I cannot wait for more ~_^
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