Oh, weird!Hakkai and the lipstick! This is a great idea, and you've written it particularly well - it's fantastic when those two come together.
This wasn't what going crazy felt like at all.
As he washed the red stains from the china, he considered that it might feel different every time.
Ah, and some creepy!Hakkai for good measure.
I love Gojyo having the guts to confront him instead of just leaving it to longer. And I love Hakkai talking accountancy in the middle of kissing, because Gojyo hasn't said what he wants. They're just weird enough together to be perfect :-)
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Date: 2009-02-24 11:10 pm (UTC)This wasn't what going crazy felt like at all.
As he washed the red stains from the china, he considered that it might feel different every time.
Ah, and some creepy!Hakkai for good measure.
I love Gojyo having the guts to confront him instead of just leaving it to longer. And I love Hakkai talking accountancy in the middle of kissing, because Gojyo hasn't said what he wants. They're just weird enough together to be perfect :-)